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letters of healing's avatar

what a beautiful piece! Love your language!

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

“licked the ink of transformation off my fingers,” This was absolutely beautiful. Would definitely love to connect and read more. Subscribed.

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aspen kae 🌸🕊️'s avatar

tysm 🫶🏻💌 returned the sub~ cannot wait to read your work as well

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Home Sweet Stephie's avatar

This is gorgeous. In awe of these words and the images they create 😍

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aspen kae 🌸🕊️'s avatar

tysm 🥹 that’s so nice 🫶🏻

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Diary of the Unpoet's avatar

“But it is a quiet rot.” Lovely poem!!

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aspen kae 🌸🕊️'s avatar

ohhh tysm 🥹🌸 i'm glad you enjoyed it

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Raquel Kiaraa's avatar

This line: If I must decay, let it be beautiful.

If I must break, let my splinters catch the light.

Hit me hard. Keep writing you beautiful soul you x

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aspen kae 🌸🕊️'s avatar

thank you! you're so kind 🥹🫶🏻

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Michael Parshall's avatar

The sky splits its lip on a crocus bloom beautiful image!

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aspen kae 🌸🕊️'s avatar

thank you! i'm glad you liked it 💕

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ꩇׁׅ݊ꪱׁׅɑׁׅ֮'s avatar

Impactful and graceful!

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aspen kae 🌸🕊️'s avatar

thank you so much 🫶🏻

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Jessica G Ferrer's avatar

Wow! This is stunning. The language, the visuals, the writing, the story. Beautiful my friend. <3

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aspen kae 🌸🕊️'s avatar

oh my goodness, tysm 🥹🥰

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Sol ☼'s avatar

The last line, *chills*. I love the way you write, sweet soul ✨

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aspen kae 🌸🕊️'s avatar

ahhh tysm 🥹🥰 that means so much

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April's Voice, Through Poetry's avatar

Beautiful. I love this line: How do I make music from the sound of my knees hitting the floor?

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aspen kae 🌸🕊️'s avatar

thank you 🥹 I’m glad you liked it

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Sky's avatar

I have never read such a beautiful reflection on a cancelled flight! Your words are gorgeoussss

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aspen kae 🌸🕊️'s avatar

tysm 🥹🫶🏻

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Natalia Ochoa's avatar

wow, your words are like a rich and profound symphony

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Samantha's avatar

this swept me out of my living room and into a world of just feelings, so beautiful x

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aspen kae 🌸🕊️'s avatar

oh my goodness tysm 🥹🫶🏻 i’m so happy you liked it

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