Okay, Aspen, you just blew my mind !! Did you create this story from scratch? Crazy good imagery, and I love the mermaids' names, nice extra touch. You did several 'novel' things. I've never heard that mermaids were carnivors. I had no idea they could control the ocean or sink ships. Understandably, they detest royalty. You have opened a big door. Excellent writing !!!!!! Michael
But Amara had more refined tastes.
She preferred to pick her teeth with the bones of kings.
Literal chills!
love this SO MUCH!!
Gorgeous writing!
Beautiful piece, Aspen! I love mermaids and that you made these mermaids into almost mer-sirens.
Okay, Aspen, you just blew my mind !! Did you create this story from scratch? Crazy good imagery, and I love the mermaids' names, nice extra touch. You did several 'novel' things. I've never heard that mermaids were carnivors. I had no idea they could control the ocean or sink ships. Understandably, they detest royalty. You have opened a big door. Excellent writing !!!!!! Michael